rape
his penis throbbing
breathing raspy
he pushes into me
I cry out
NO
the first tell tale sign
he holds me down
confusion kicks in
at the pub
we were telling everyone
WE WERE BEST FRIENDS
and now
NOW you are pushing your dick into me
to complicate things
a stranger walks in
joins in the 'party'
I am pushed between the two
like a useless piece of meat
NO
I cry out
do u think they stop
they continue
I black out for pieces of it
come to
push them away
NO
pass out
under the influence
I cant fight
I cant stop them
when it is over
there is nothingness
bleakness
emptiness
I cry
I cry
I cry
and you pretened to be my friend
tell me you didnt mean to
what more does NO mean
what further indication do u need??
I am hollow
I am in pain
FUCK you
HAPPY FUCKEN NEW YEAR
Author notes
For me writing is my way of getting painful experiences out. This relates to your taste in music because I find that alof of the heavier music is sung and written by people who are damaged in one way or another and use their music for healing and getting that pain and anguish out.
A contest entry
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wow
This is very, very sad.. Im really sorry if you have experienced this and i hope you can work through this!!! Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah
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wow
the tempo was like really fast and... wow i love it!!! this is definitly gonna go into the finalist list -
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thanks for the great comment on my poem...and for the add to the finalist list
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Very shocking and moving, this is a really good piece of writing.
I feel and relate to the pain expressed in your work.
Really good =]
x x x
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wow I feel your pain written in this piece. You express yourself very well. I am sorry that you had to go through this horrible situation. He definitely was not a "friend" or else he would have understood that no means no!
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thanks for your reply to my poem. it was a very painful upsetting time...luckily it was quite a few years ago that it happened so on the surface it doesnt hurt anymore
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