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Nostalgia (or Saved, depending on how you look at it)

Sensual cigars
send straight away to my nose,
a feeling of past
mistakes and remorse, for my
past fellows and ladies gone back...
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home.

A contest entry

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  • written-in-ink
    October 4, 2008

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    i thought that this was a very good poem
    i mean it was very well written
    i dont know how i feel about the ...
    but i think that it was a good try

    thank you so much for entering