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Dreams For Sale.

There was a rumour that settled across the ocean,
It rounded itself upon the sea.
And only I heard it calling...
And only you can set it free.

Across the wishes of that distant land,
Time alone can take it's hand.
Standing in the mist alone,
Time is gone, but time will come.

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Option 10, Dreams for Sale...

Not my usual style...

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Do I need to change this?

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  • fillurhands
    October 2, 2008

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    This interesting - a real thinker. This is the kind of poem that the reader must contemplate for a while. I'm not sure what to make of it yet, but I certainly like it. Good Write!


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    September 30, 2008
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    yeh different for you but you did this very well :-) xx


  • WildlifeDoc
    September 30, 2008

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    very nice little contest write!
    My VERY fave part: "And only I heard it calling...
    And only you can set it free'....youare so good at that! Love those words!


  • Princess Cuddle Bug
    September 30, 2008

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    i like it for it not to be your usual style you did a very good job at it! plus i applaud you for trying something new!

    ~*Princess Cuddle Bug*~