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Why Did the Knife Cross the Road?

Why did the knife cross the road?
to get to the other side
and bleed out all the
suffering

Why did the knife cross the road?
to slice open
all my agony and woe

Why did the knife cross the road?
to watch the gore
that has become my wrist

Why did the knife cross the road?
to slit my wrist

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  • Stride
    September 30, 2008

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    If I didn't know any better, I'd probably flip a bitch at you honey. It's clever and witty, and I really like the bitterness to it. I don't want to enocurage this, but at the same time it's a really good piece!