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See Into My Heart

 

It's 3 am in the morning, I lay awake;

beside me, not knowing what's at stake.

Listening to the sound of you breath,

it won't be long, it's 'me' you'll grieve.

 

No longer able to feel your pain,

I often feel, you're driving me insane.

Why, can't you see into my heart?

Seems we're doomed -- from the start?

 

Alone, I 'm wondering... 'was it me?'

Will you care, or glad to be free?

Emptiness fills the pain I was in.

To write, I wouldn't know where to begin.

 

5 am in the morning, the sky's golden light,

marks it's time, to make my flight.

If only once, you had tried to see...

my spirit was lost, but now it's free.

 

 

 

 

 

or am I?  

 

 

 

  

Author notes

Suicide Blonde -- A poem written only for the contest, thoughts of suicide is a permenant solution to a temporary problem. Though, we don't think life can change... if we take the time to make a stand for the things we believe in, cherish and love. You too, will see the flowers bloom and grow.

GIVE LIFE A CHANCE!

I like honesty... I can't learn unless you tell me how you really feel.

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  • Amera gold member
    May 1

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    It's a true gift to be able to put this kind of emotion into a poem when you really don't feel that way. I love your heart of a poet!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • sassylilpoet silver member
    January 7

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    Beautiful sis!..ah, the pain and heartache you painted with your words. I like your inspiring author notes also.

    Blessings,
    Sassy


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 5, 2008
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    It rocked in many varied ways for sure, I gleaned so much from this write lol


  • Silver Asylum
    October 8, 2008

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    Wow

    This poem completely beautiful. I appreciate the poem. I especially liked the ending. The structure was amazing and I want to truly thankyou for entering this contest. This poem was a pleasure to read and touched my heart deeply