Frozen creeks icy home
For beaver,while deer,
Plus wandering moose
Midst the bulrushes
Love to roam.
Now,from sounds
Along the weir
Cries of swimnmers
Sounds of cheer
Summers here!
A contest entry
- 25 words~ Nature, by misticmoonlite.
300 points, ended October 1, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your thoughts about this muse....
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Wonderful
A great choice of 25 words. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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what lovely visions
as fall comes in we wait for winter then spring again..all pretty and content to be in as seasons bring us peace, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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This flow is as tranquil and healing as a small waterfall. The rhyme is stellar! Absolutely gorgeous work! I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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i liked the jaunt through the cold to warm.. yet showing how life lives through it all.
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This is nice.
I love the picture, very beautiful image. I grew up in the country, though not the wilds. I saw many a deer and my share of beaver damns. Unfortunately our pond and creek was nowhere near as pretty as this. The last line makes me "stumble" because it has an extra beat. Consider just Summer's here! That way both last lines have three beats each. Just a suggestion. Good luck!
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Delightful little Poem
Such imagery you have penned as you delve into this and the vision beyond
Best wishes Julie
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Great job, a good feeling discription. A vision to reflect on.
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you are so
Talented! very nice flow, very fiestive!
Blessings
Rend
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