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The End of a Tunnel






She couldn't find

a goddamn vein -

I could hear her calling

from the end of a tunnel,

"That's another fucking hole."

I didn't mean to bring her here,

but I think she's going to stay this time,

little princess of the shooting gallery,

sucking dicks for another cotton ball

and begging Chester to help her run it -

she's got a fashion show on Friday

and she can't show up with bruises

again.

Rebecca breaks my heart

every time I think

of all the fucking smack

I wasted

trying to put my dick into her

and it turns out

she's another fucking hole.




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  • poet girl
    December 21, 2008
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    Ha ha, but what would all the addicts of the world do if they didn't have their hole.

  • jantastic gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    excellent


  • poetryality silver member
    October 3, 2008

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    Your characters are haunting, reminds me of some people I knew in a past life. Brilliant. Raw & Real! I love how you share these stories! What a tawdry life you live. That makes for some damn good poetry. "Holes" are everywhere, watch your step!


    Always ♥

    Renee

  • grm
    September 30, 2008

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    yup. i hate when that happens too.
    but, if you don't make the effort, you end up on your death bed wondering "what if?"

    remarkably raw


  • Saffron gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    I like this...

    but I have to wonder--what about Lonnie??



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