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TOP WAS DONE IN A SHADOW ACROSTIC: SerenityNChains
FOLLOWED BY A SONNET with a hidden acrostic
Unleash the binds that hold you back
kiss the life that you have now
Please walk fast pace from the black
that will always try to capture you somehow.
Within the past abused, molested, raped a time or two
I understand the feelings that arise from time to time
But know this my angel that within the depths of you
there is the strengh to move forward, to make your light shine.
Fear not the memories of the past, toss then away
easier said then done I know, believe me I do know.
For we are warriors we won the battle that came our way
now we are needed to speak out to shout out, to help another grow.
Join hands with another who has wore similar shoes
one who has awakened from hell to face death again.
I shall never bow down, for my life I will not lose
I will move forward until I touch the hearts that need a mend.
A contest entry
- Silent All These Years (for rape and sexual assault survivors) by SerenityNChains.
1750 points, ended November 9, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I am at a loss for this gift. It amazes me in so ,many ways. Mere thanks are not enough. However I offer them all the same. Thank you for such a wonderful gift.
Blessings,
Serene

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My first impression was that you are a very dedicated friend and emotionally bonded with other souls. I loved the acrostic idea and dedication, bringing some hope aboard, instead of constant tears, as I did. I believe that sufferers need not to hear more suffering, but pieces of some dreams left unshattered and love that still lingers in the spirit. Thank you very much for sharing this poem. I felt so much better after reading this write instead of feeling sorrow and pain. Great job dear poet!


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You wrote amazingly to incorporate all these forms; I am just speechless as to how wonderful they are - no words i have could express my utter admiration for you at this moment in time.

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Great writing with wonderfully lever work on the acrostics, you are on superb form!
Great poetry


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This is a wonderfully creative write. Love the way your poems spells out serenity. Good job in this write.


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Wonderfully written of hope and encouragement baby. Doing what you do best sweetheart, trying to help others. I love you...Scott


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A great write--haunting read
Another one that opens the eyes and educates the readers

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Thanks hon for your comment. As always I appreciate your words
Love
Tory
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I love your acrostic!!! Its amazing!! I love the way you wrote your words they are really cool!!! Your word choice is lovley!!! Everything flows so nicely!! This is Incredible from start to finish!!! I LOVE IT!!









