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SerenityNChains (ded. SerenityNChains)

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Silent cries escape, a damaged heart tears
e arth beneath us splits, we fight the battle
r epeated dreams haunt us, we're damned by fear
e very sound grips us, our nerves start to rattle
n ights of tremors, shadows form this man
i wake suddenly, wondering, who am I?
t hen my hearts races, as he starts to rant
y anking away my youth, I wonder why.
N aturally we gather up and run
C arrying coldness like a frigid a.c.
h uddling in a ball trying to seek warmth
a nd all that is there is a scared momma
i know the inner battle, the truth behind "i"
n othing you can do will shed the torn skin
s o guilt lingers heavily, til we lose our minds

Within our minds we see no end in sight
let me tell you, every dog has their day
As we stand up, we realize there's light
and the doors of our existence gives way

Strength will conquer nights of heated nightmares
and believe me friend I know about the fear
There is hope within the pain that you bare,
scars will burn deep, but your voice they'll hear

You have won the battle, no longer cry
for you are a woman full of courage
Stand up, be proud, don't let hope wither and die,
friends will need someone to accept and encourage...them.

To rise above the fear like you and I
and become a voice that will not back down
you are a rock of promise, stand your ground.

Author notes

TOP WAS DONE IN A SHADOW ACROSTIC: SerenityNChains

FOLLOWED BY A SONNET with a hidden acrostic


Unleash the binds that hold you back
kiss the life that you have now
Please walk fast pace from the black
that will always try to capture you somehow.

Within the past abused, molested, raped a time or two
I understand the feelings that arise from time to time
But know this my angel that within the depths of you
there is the strengh to move forward, to make your light shine.

Fear not the memories of the past, toss then away
easier said then done I know, believe me I do know.
For we are warriors we won the battle that came our way
now we are needed to speak out to shout out, to help another grow.

Join hands with another who has wore similar shoes
one who has awakened from hell to face death again.
I shall never bow down, for my life I will not lose
I will move forward until I touch the hearts that need a mend.

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  • SerenityNChains gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    I am at a loss for this gift. It amazes me in so ,many ways. Mere thanks are not enough. However I offer them all the same. Thank you for such a wonderful gift.

    Blessings,
    Serene

  • Acidanthra
    October 1, 2008

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    My first impression was that you are a very dedicated friend and emotionally bonded with other souls. I loved the acrostic idea and dedication, bringing some hope aboard, instead of constant tears, as I did. I believe that sufferers need not to hear more suffering, but pieces of some dreams left unshattered and love that still lingers in the spirit. Thank you very much for sharing this poem. I felt so much better after reading this write instead of feeling sorrow and pain. Great job dear poet!


  • Symphony
    October 1, 2008

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    You wrote amazingly to incorporate all these forms; I am just speechless as to how wonderful they are - no words i have could express my utter admiration for you at this moment in time.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Great writing with wonderfully lever work on the acrostics, you are on superb form!

    Great poetry


  • trekkergirl
    September 30, 2008

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    This is a wonderfully creative write. Love the way your poems spells out serenity. Good job in this write.


  • Griswold silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    Wonderfully written of hope and encouragement baby. Doing what you do best sweetheart, trying to help others. I love you...Scott


  • The Drifter
    September 29, 2008
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    A great write--haunting read
    Another one that opens the eyes and educates the readers


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      September 29, 2008
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      Thanks hon for your comment. As always I appreciate your words

      Love
      Tory


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 29, 2008

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    I love your acrostic!!! Its amazing!! I love the way you wrote your words they are really cool!!! Your word choice is lovley!!! Everything flows so nicely!! This is Incredible from start to finish!!! I LOVE IT!!

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