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alluring complications

The gleam of my pretty shackles

catch waves of hidden heat. 

Unbind me so I may capture

dangerous, yet alluring complications.

 

Break the delicate chains,

hindering me from

positive flows;

 

Drive me down new motorways

respond to these gentle curves

Built soundly for easy handling,

labeled temptation in

ecstatic definition;

the latest model

In no way a shortcut.

 

Feminine in austerity,

sensuous by design,

lucious on your lips

drip on me the

overwhelming essence 

special signature recipe;

My homespun honey.

 

I am made and infused with the

illustrous practical magic;

the scent of tantalizing woman. 

 

Come taste me.

 

 

Holly Ann Stevens.  September 30, 2008

Author notes

I sure like the prompt. I tried to write this from the lady's pov.
I am nowhere near that perfect, or confident.
She sure is beautiful.

The above painting is by the incomparable Paul John Ballard.

The name is, Beauty of the Female.

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  • Arabella
    October 26, 2008
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    I enjoyed your poem. It is obviously inspiring. Thank you for your wonderful poem.


  • tanzanite
    October 22, 2008

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    I wonder if you know what an honor it is to be chosen as the one who inspired a prolific talented poet like luckynsincere! This was a beautiful piece of work and I loved it.


  • Corvus Corone
    October 22, 2008

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    Your affinity with the subject shines here, sensual word play yet so tastefully done. Yep can see why Mel slected your poem as her inspiration.


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    This is wonderfully done and does tell her point of view. You have talent dear. Please keep your quilll dipped in ink.

    Riftkin


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    Truely a delightful and wonderful read here. It's easy to see why one can find inspiration in this.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • luckynsincere
    October 21, 2008
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    Hi.. me again.

    I wanted to return and share this with you. Your poem has truly been an inspiration to me. I hope that you will continue to write and share your talent here on this site as well as with the world!

    Here is the link to my poem that you inspired: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4703925

    Sincerely,
    Melanie


    • highjinx
      November 4, 2008
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      thank you thank you thank you, for such a wonderful honour! I am beside myself, and am only sorry it took so long to get back to you with my gratitude and humble heartfelt, and inspired by your inspiration of my write! I cannot wait to read, I wish you all the best, and thank you very much!
      HollyAnn

  • luckynsincere
    October 21, 2008

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    This is beautiful erotica. I love that you utilized sensual and desirable words without going overboard. I also see you just joined this site. WELCOME ABOARD!! This is such a wonderful place to draw inspiration.

    The pic inspiration is delightful, and of course can cause the ink to flow, but it was your words that captured me as a reader... it pulled me into this poem. You have inspired me

    Thanks for sharing a piece of your talent with us

    Sincerely,
    Melanie


  • j i n gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    I realllllllllly liked this! I think you did a fantastic interpretation of the prompt featured. Very well done.
    I wish you all the best,
    jin


  • queen Moderators member
    September 30, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi highjinx

    This is really good, good luck to you in the contest please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
    site greeter


  • humblpye gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Right on...!

    I think you captured the prompt most exotically..."my homespun honey...come taste me" yum! good words and imagery, good luck in the contest
    John


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    This is really exellent. Loved it. I see you are new here and that you write free verse....exellently to I might add. Check out "Dalaney" on this site...she is one of the best free verse writers on here. Pam

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