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what?

700 hundred billion

obama

mcain

what else do we need to think about
time and time again

war
hunger
peace

children crying
just for some rice

700 billion

yet we cannot even feed our own
stop the war
bring our troops home

greed is the root
ego is what started it all

now we are taking a fall
what do we do

that is my question

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  • seven
    October 1, 2008
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    true enough


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    September 30, 2008

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    Wow! This world is starting to feel this. I am worried. Thank you for writing a poem about the issues we face today. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~

  • Eusebius
    September 30, 2008

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    topical, moooost topical piece here, and very deftly done (I wish I had a real clue on the economy, but poetry is considerably better than nothing, for certain!) bravo... bravo!


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 29, 2008

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    I really like how you wrote this!!!Great details and fabulous description!!! Your words are written so clear excellent word selection!!! This is amazing all the way around!!! I LOVE IT!!