Impeccable darkness engulfs all hope
Shadows whisper of the coming end
Perfection hung by just enough rope
A deceiving hand of help please lend.
Evil abounds in the realm of trust
All is lost in the sea of light
Liberty has become mortal just
And is given to the gift of night.
Author notes
Username: Sekhmet Kitty
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Just came to mind. To some, this may not make sense, but to me it does >.<
The title explains the poem and if you don't get it, please don't ask me because I'm terrible at explaining things =)
A contest entry
- ANYTHING .... but. by written-in-ink.
1000 points, ended October 19, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - contemporary emotional personal poetry♥ by etoile.
575 points, ended October 19, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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If one thinks about it you sort of
get it after a while...mac
this give one something to chew on for the rest of the day.
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this was nicely written. however I'm not that fond of rhyme, but otherwise this was well done. I liked the imagery you put out.
the first line was my favourite and it was a very strong beginning to this piece.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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Line 4 sounded a bit forced. Good write otherwise! Liked line 8 a lot.
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i thought that youi did a good job of saying what you felt
and isnt that all that counts?
i think so
in anycase
thank you so much and good luck
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