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To Get Where You're Going

To get where you're going
You must cross every ocean
Reach for the heavens, and rest in their favor
To get where you're going
You have to be strong
Only questions and answers will get you out there

To get where you're going
You have to give up your life
No one can understand, they will hate and fear you
To get where you're going
You must learn to have faith
You must keep your heart open, and not forget your dreams

To get where you're going
Some have given much
All their gold, all their jewels, all their plans and their fights
To get where you're going
Some have died and been gone
It's a long, darkened road that will play with your head

To get where you're going
You can think like the night
Like a dragon with wings, you can rear and take flight
To get where you're going
You can see through your dreams
Become more than you are, become less like the day

To get where you're going
You must spread your wings now
Don't look back at me, just look straight ahead
To get where you're going
Let the wind carry you
I wish you luck, peace and all, my sweet student and dear. 

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Yet more notebook scribbling, written for Maria. Hope you like babe!

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  • kyuuketsuki ai
    October 21, 2008

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    AWWW!!!! I love it.....(of course ^_^) It reminds me of 'Immortal wings' a bit, with some rhythms, etc....and the overall feel...nice devices of speech without them being overbearing.. I love notebook scribbling.....anyways. I'll talk to you soon (I've been UBER busy...)
    <3
    Maria


  • AllYoullNeverHave
    October 21, 2008

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    This is just awesome, sis! I love the metaphors and everything. Kind of reminds me of what someone would say to someone that is afraid to leave for college... This has touched me. And all this is so true. To get where you're going, to where you really want to end up, you have to put in a lot of effort and do so much, a lot like you have penned here. Good job sis! Keep it up! Love ya!

    ♥Chelsea