..........Unfinished..........

feel words whisper
soul danced along
smooth alabaster

untouched flaws
overlooked as eyes
find knowing

auburn tendrils
wore tear drops
whetted an appetite
a craved release
in snippets

grasped moments
clutched a heart

skin against skin
overshadow yesterday's
memories of alone

Author notes

Prompt: " Snippets Of Desire "

This piece is finished but... life isn't

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A contest entry

Snippets Of Desire. by Poetryintheblood. 525 points, ended October 2, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
BATTLE OF THE GOLD SHORTS 1 by Swan song. 2000 points, ended October 18, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
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Swan song
October 17, 2008
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A beautiful poem and background!

Poetryintheblood
October 2, 2008

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Thank you for your most exquisite entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

fumes
September 30, 2008
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lovely!

princessleejwctlvr2
September 29, 2008
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this is so lovely!!! You did a wonderful job as always!!! I love it!!

Cannonsfire
September 29, 2008
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Hmmm...me thinks LW's are a little 'ungry for more words .....simply beautiful C

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