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Door of oppurtunity. . .?

Is there secrets within?
What truths may be known?
Closed doors are mysteries
and
Not always unlocked
Due to fears and doubts...

A contest entry

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  • nichtmich silver member
    October 11, 2008
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    Short, but very expressive. Sometimes the locks only exist in our minds. Great entry, thank you very much.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 5, 2008

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    Yes..I there fore suggest that wal on the path of light..removing your doubts and fears..this way you can live the inspiring and wonderful life..a great poetry by you my friend...


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    A very interesting piece. Really sets the readers head spinning in thought.
    Well done.. Good luck in the contest.
    Soulful Woman


  • ShelleyA gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    A clever write and message.
    Good flow and tone. Good word
    choice, nice alliteration and
    assonance. Best wishes in the
    contest.


  • ArtRocks27
    September 29, 2008

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    This poems seems to have many meanings but I wonder how many people can truly understand the many possibilites this poem has? I like it I really do. Would you be so kind as to read my poem called Never Ending Infinity? I think you would like it.

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