She was a houdini groupie
dancin on glasss
just to see if he would fall from grace
to be her doormat.
Alas, no, but did stop by to tuck her in.
Her bed, a coffin made from an iron maiden.
Atonement was leering from the corner
with morbid curiousity
and disappeared in a puff of smoke
thru that cracked one way mirror
A contest entry
- ANYTHING .... but. by written-in-ink.
1000 points, ended October 19, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Did it make ya think and/or feel?
Comments
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wow
very nice
i think that you did a very nice good with this
i mean
it did make me think
thank you for sharing
and good luck in my contest.
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Ouch! can you feel it...I can...makes you want to run yet want to stay...question is which is stronger...well done with questions hanging...
best,
mystic
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