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You're the Reason

I can't move
I can't breathe
And you're the reason
The air shifts
Temperatures spike
Heads turn, mouths open
All while you're walking by
Your hair flicks
Your eyes gleam
I am rendered defenseless
When you scan over
I'm weak
And I fall
When people ask me
Why I can't move
I can't breathe
Can I honestly tell them
That you're the reason?

Author notes

More notebook scribbling, because Maria told me to. -_^

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  • AllYoullNeverHave
    October 21, 2008

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    Wow! This is incredible. You truly have a knack for this scribbling amazing poetry thing, don't you? I really like this... a lot. (And yes, I'm commenting on all of your recent poems that I haven't read yet... I told you I've been busy. But I found time and needed to read some good poetry, so I came here.) This is just awesome! Keep writing, sis! Love ya!

    ♥Chelsea