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Brown Sugar Honey

I once had a huge brown and white bunny
Her name was Brown Sugar Honey
Now this particular bunny did not hop
She walked like she was doing the bop

I would play my music loud and fast and she would jump
Sometimes she’d even stand and just wiggle her rump
My other rabbits were cute and all but totally lazy
Now Brown Sugar honey was my favorite and crazy

I decided to take Honey on the television circuit
Fame and fortune would certainly be worth it
But all was lost one sinful Sunday afternoon
When Honey was served for dinner I nearly swooned

We raised rabbits for a living did I mention this
I thought she was hiding not dropped into this horrible abyss
How did I know that my Honey was served as today’s meal
She was the fattest rabbit we’d ever had; something gravy could not conceal

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  • written-in-ink
    October 4, 2008

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    gah

    so i must tell you
    i have an irrational fear of bunnies!!!

    gah!!!

    your background is scary
    but


    this was a very nice poem
    thank you s much for entering and good luck


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 4, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting, sorry the subject is objectable to you I feel the same way about insects. God Bless, Jo-Ann