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Wi did wi ting (We did our thing) Lyrics





Verse:

Come on mon
Smell da ocean
Come on mon
Get in motion

Feel da sand mon
Between ya toes
Feel da heat mon
Give a go (give a go)

Come on mon
Smell da ocean
Come on mon
Get in motion

~Chorus~

Buss in da waves
Ah sey one  
Jook with ya babe
Ah sey one
Ah, har scenty (scenty)
Ah, har plenty (plenty)

Come on mon
Join da fun
Come on mon
Find a ooman

Buss in da waves
Ah sey one
Jook with ya babe
Ah sey one
Ah, har scenty (so scenty)
Ah, har plenty (so plenty)


Bridge:

I-man waan dat
No tell (no tell)
I-man waan dat
No tell (no tell)

Verse:

Come on mon
Smell da ocean
Come on mon
Get in motion

Feel da sand mon
Between ya toes
Feel da heat mon
Give a go (give a go)

~Repeat Chorus and fade~


Author notes

Prompt:  Destination Bahamas* As part of the Caribbean it is also known for Reggae and Calypso style music, with this in mind you can write song lyrics in either style.

Some extra clarificationsWink 
 

Ah sey one(ah seh won)- Expression to say that something is really cool and great.
Buss- To bust; like to bust a move; burst out; unruly.
Jook- To pierce or poke; to have sex.
Scenty (sent-tee)- Smelling good; a good scent, perfume
Ooman- woman

I-man waan dat- I want that

Har- her

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  • Frozentearz
    October 6, 2008

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    You have most certinly stepped out of the box with this one a wonderful job and thanks so much for adding the lingo within your about box.
    Thanks for joining in, wonderful job.
    Warm thoughts.
    Frozentearz


  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    I could just hear the steel drums behind a deeply accented rasta singer on the beach singin this while winking at the girls passing by. wonderful fun piece.


    • jasminerose
      October 4, 2008
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      Thank you Scott for the lovely words on my entry and for hosting this wonderful contest! It has been so much fun to be in and very inspiring to my muse!
      Jazzy


  • Polaja Greeters member
    October 3, 2008

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    This is a really fun litle song - I can hear the upbeat rhythm in my mind when I read it I really like the way you have used the language well to make this interesting and certainly unique! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

    Keep writing

    Polly

    • jasminerose
      October 4, 2008
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      Thank you Polly for the very inspiring comment on my entry!! I am so glad you could feel the rhythm of my poem(song)!!
      Thank you so very much!
      Linda


  • DolphinLass silver member
    October 3, 2008
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    very well done, good luck


  • Elfin
    October 2, 2008

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    I am just stuck for words, all the poems are so so good, I do not envy the judges. Well done and good luck in the contest. Val

    • jasminerose
      October 3, 2008
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      Hi Val, thank you so much for the wonderful comment, I don't envy them either, they may all just need a vacation from these rounds when it is all over I know I would!!
      Thanks again!!
      Linda


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    That's brilliant!!! Gave me a right giggle!!!

    Very creative hun.. I wanna go there!!

    • jasminerose
      October 3, 2008
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      Always nice to hear I can give out a giggle or two when it comes to being creative Thank you so much for the wonderful comment
      and I want to go there too!
      Linda


  • Harrisham Minhas
    October 1, 2008

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    Hey friend.
    You have done a cool job with these lyrics. Its very much like a hip-hop song.
    Well-expressed.
    Good luck in the contest.



    • jasminerose
      October 3, 2008
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment on my entry lol A bit different for me but hey, it was lots of fun!
      Great hearing from you my friend
      Linda


  • moonbumps silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    Whoooooo! I'm dere mon!!!!!!!Wiggling me ting!!!!
    Hilly xxx


    • jasminerose
      October 1, 2008

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      lol Thank you for the comment Hilly! Glad I could get your wigglin your ting
      Linda


  • Jersene gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    this is cool...can hear a faint melody of steel drums in the background

    • jasminerose
      September 30, 2008
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      lol Thanks Jersene, just a bit out of the box for me but hey, want to join in the fun and dance with us all!
      Always wonderful to hear from you!!
      Linda


  • poppa
    September 30, 2008

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    yah mon , dem vibes sure is rockin..
    looking forward to seeing the video clip palm trees, s and dat der ooman
    great stuff

    • jasminerose
      September 30, 2008
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      I will inform you immediately when the video comes out for viewing pleasure
      Thanks for the wonderful comment Rob Pull up a few palm trees and hang wit us
      Thanks
      Linda


  • Fug-azi
    September 30, 2008

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    Looks like we took the same route sis, but yours has so much more sunshine to it .. great, loved it

    • jasminerose
      September 30, 2008
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      Oh you are being too kind bro Thank you for the lovely comment and see, we must all be related being we all chose the option to write some tunes.lol
      Glad you enjoyed
      Jazzy


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    ROFLMAO
    omg my sides are hurting and I am ready to go to the beach
    You did a great job on this, bff....It is cool and sensually awesome

    Yo Mon, you rock

    Lynda


    • jasminerose
      September 29, 2008
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      lol Thanks BFF Let's go right now!!! Glad I could bring you some sunshine!!
      Jazzy

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