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Betrayal

All of us
have the capacity to betray
those closest to the abyss
and I stand in awe
as it stares
back...

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  • maktub
    October 10, 2008

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    Deep. Could have swallowed me away into its depth...
    Great write...short, yet powerful!
    Smile♫


  • written-in-ink
    October 4, 2008

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    amazing
    and true
    thank you so much for sharing

    i thought that you did a good job

    good luck and once again thank you