Nature's pallet of vibrant hues,
canopy upon branches high.
Flecks of sunlight peek
between crimson and gold,
as veined leaves beautify,
autumn's crisp September sky.
In a list
A contest entry
- 25 words~ Nature, by misticmoonlite.
300 points, ended October 1, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a wonderful description of autumn to complement the prompt with vibrant hues of color. Short and sweet takes the reader to breath fresh winds as nature changes coats between summer and winter.
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Wonderful Comment
Hello Dan. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. You do bring me smiles everyday.
. Bles you always dear friend. Hugs and Smiles across the miles.
Bless You and Your family.
Sandy
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Niaish Ma Emo from all my children
I love when the trees start to change colors. It is one of my favorite times before the cold sets in and it is too cold. Niaishi Ma Emo from all my children with love. -
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Lovely Comment
Niaish For the nice comment. I appreciate you reading. Take care. Sandy
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You painted a prettier picture with your words than you have posted above. sheer genius!
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Good Morning
Thank you for reading and commenting sweet niece. Hugs and Smiles.
Bless You,
Sandy
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again lovely
poetry becomes you, the rhyme of this picture speaks volumes in pretty fall colors, thank you so much for this entry,
good luck
Linda
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Good Morning Linda
Thank you for the lovely comment. You take care. Sandy
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Wonderful....so brillant are the words you choose as deep with imagery as the changing of the seasons and the deep fall colors.
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Good Morning June
Thank you for the wonderful comment. I hope all is weell with you this fine Fall day.
Hugs and Smiles. You take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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Nature never looked so beautiful!
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Good Morning Amanda
A lovely comment from a lovely niece. Bless you. Hugs and Smiles.
Always, Sandy
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Such a wonderful picture YOU have painted with your words. Exquisite.
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate the nice comment. Take care.
Sandy
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Sandy
Just a few perfect lines for this very beautiful fall scene. This is my favorite time of the year. Enjoy my poet friend and as always ... Happy writing.
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Good Morning Bob
Thank you for this lovely comment. Hope all is well with my friend. Hugs and Smiles. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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This almost makes me like Autumn! But really, the image and your poem are very pleasing. I just can never get past the Autumn means winter is on its way.
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Thank You Camelia
I appreciate you reading and commenting. Take care. Sandy
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Goood job
so pretty , loved your write...mac
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Good Morniung Mac
Thank you for the nice comment. Hope your day is full of hugs and smiles. Blessings to you dear friend.
Always, Sandy
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Breathtakingly Beautiful...
I always enjoy reading your vibrant work - your poetry is very soothing to the soul. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest!!!
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Good Morning Cyn
Always nice to read your thoughtful comments. Niaish for stopping and reading. Hugs and smiles for you. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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