I can still feel the music play
As you danced across the floor
As I stood there so enraptured
From my place there at the door
I didn't think you saw me there
With my hidden dreams of you
And then I saw the simple smile
That said to me please be true
We danced to every song they played
Moving with a love we found
Gazing into each other's eyes
In a world lost from sound
Years have passed and we have changed
Yet in the dance we are the same
And again I say I love you
In your arms I will remain
A contest entry
- Fulfill My Dreams And Say You Love Me. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 2, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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EVER SO BEAUTIFUL AND SO SWEET!!!!
If only some of us could find love like this!
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Thank you for your beautifully spoken write, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Beautiful Words
This was a very romantic poem. It speaks of new love and how it can start with just a look. I do believe in love at first sight.
This was a lovely poem and sa pleasure to read this evening. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy 
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Just so lovely! You have the true heart of a poet and a romantic! This brought a smile of hope to my face that such things can exist!
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Now this is the kind of warmth to read. Starts at the base of the spine and sends good feelings all the way to the tip of the soul. Very nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Storm
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Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!
It's always nice to know that true love (and romance) still exixts in this cold world. Thank you for sharing, and I'm wishing you the best of luck in the contest!!!
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Thank you for your kind words,
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