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[ Thump Thump ]

Thump Thump
I'm strangely
unsteadily
feeling my heart jump

It's quick
and pumps
in my throat
it thumps

Convulse
no pain
not sick
no shame
just
somthing
to gain

I've lost
my train
of thought

can't walk
need sleep
can't make
a peep



Thump Thump
I'm in deep

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