My heart weeps for the one who made me whole.
For no longer am i complete, my heart being ripped into pieces.
My soul it burns with desire, for the one who is part of it.
For its you My Soulmate, who is destined to be my best friend.
Destined to be my lover and my mate, but hten now is lost...
I never meant to hurt you, I never wanted to make you cry
For that is what tears me up even more, and then I die a little more.
I never wanted things to be the way they are, I was such a naive fool
For now we are both suffering, and for that I die a whole lot more.
To know how my heart tells me of the pain, to have my mind replay it all again.
For no longer can I hide these feelings, I just wanna shout it out loud
My Soul it sings out loud everytime you were near.. or even with your voice..
For its You and Me.. and the Holy Ghost who really knows how I feel.
I never meant to get angry, I never meant for all this to happen
For its what tears me up inside even more, and then I die a little more.
I never wanted to be controlling, just wanted to be a major part of Us.
So now we are both suffering, and for that I die a whole lot more.
Now that I`m so far away.. I close my eyes and begin to pray,
To the Father Son and Holy Ghost, that some day soon again
I will be complete again, With you in my arms Again.
I`m goin through changes to make me the best I can.
I never meant to make you cry, I never wanted any of this
For no longer can I hide my feelings, I just wanna shout it out loud.
I never meant to lose control, To lose myself into the emptiness
For now we are both Suffering, and for that I die a whole lot more..
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such sadness
A song so written that it fits into ones own lifes experiences,,, -
tearfully reading these poems,, such emotion
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Wow.. That is like the best thing that I ever heard & so touched me deeply. Love ur poetry even more
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To All who read this... This is a Song.. something from the heart.. more like a Rock love ballad or maybe even a country love song.. i dunno... To ALL who play an instrument... Try n find a tune that will work... as i am no music writer... Send me audio clips via YouTube.. MrBubbaloki
Thanks
Vic aka
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nice
the relation from my heart to this poem is deep.
yes...
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HI Poet:
What can I tell you that you do not
already know? This piece is very deep
and heartfelt..... The love and the pain
are felt throughout.....
However,
-please do not take this personally-
The usage of the word "again" is too
repetitive..... Other than that, words
play the way you want them to.....
Thank you for sharing with me on this site,
Blessed be always,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
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WOW!!!
WOW!!! This poem really connects to the reader. You feel like you are the person. I can relate to this, because this describes the exact position I am in with my ex boyfriend. The way you describe the emotions and feelings is amazing! Wonderful job!!!
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I truly feel the pain and emotion!! You do a truly fantastic job expressing your feelings!! This is incredible!! I love the way you portray your writes!! Excellent words and details!! I love it!!
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This is a sad but good write. Your sorrow is evident and it pains me to see it. Sometimes we make mistakes and have to pick ourselves up again. Sometimes we just need a do over.
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I loved it
awesome job great write
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Oh there is so much heartache here... I'm very sorry! Thank You for sharing this with us, you did a great job with this piece. I'm not going to "critique" it because.. I like it just the way it is
I hope that you can work everything out.
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