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Changes in an old heart..

Many sleepless nights he lays there
Crying, Thinking, Hoping, needing,
Wanting to feel Loved and needed.
To be wanted and adored by the one
The one who deep within his soul,
He knows that is his one true mate.
She makes his heart race
He melts to her soft gentle touches,
Her warm skin pressed to his rough n tough skin.

His Soul burns and is overflowing
Saying `dont stop gotta believe`
Trying to convey his thoughts
and his soul for all to see.
To witness the New Improved Better Man
Who changed his life for a chance to fully be happy.
She is the one who makes him melt.
She is the woman who makes his body tremble,
Her soft hair tickling his face as she leans in for a kiss.
Her lips soft and warm with soft sweet nibbles,
Will it ever work out? Will he ever be happy??
Or will it all just fade to memory...
As He Dies Alone.......

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  • lady-DarkestNight3
    November 23
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    *sigh*

    will YOU ever be happy? YOU deserve it so much,,,


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Hi poet:

     

    This piece is heartfelt and deep,

    thought provoking.....

     

    It has a dark part in it as well;

    uncertainty is a very mysterious

    feeling, and you have described it

    well.....

     

    Thanks for sharing with me on this

    site.....

     

    Blessed be always,

    AngelicMistress...Tanya


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    You won't die alone. And altough we sometimes "believe" a person is the right one for us, doesn't mean they actually are, but you will eventually find the one that is if it does not work out. Again, been there felt that, lost it, and found it again with someone new.