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Desperate Thoughts of a Lovestruck man...

Lying here thinking as I lay beside you..
Thinking about the fun we could`ve had.
Knowing that there isn`t anything I could do,
Feeling lost and other things inside my head...

Not knowing what to think or feel..
Torn between feelings of sadness and being unwanted.
It seem there`s no place I`d rather be,
That place is in your arms.. making sweet love to you.

It was on my mind since we first planned this
As I dreamt about it, lusted for it, anxiously awaiting that day.
Only to have it shot down, while i was still showing that I still am.
Wanting You.. Needing You.. Craving You.. But most of all..
LOVING YOU..

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  • lady-DarkestNight3
    November 23
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    thinking

    twice i have felt this pain. the worse pain i felt though, was the wanting of someone for many, many years,,, i ask myself, will it ever be? smile, you write beautifull and from the heart


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 6, 2008

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    Yes I have been here before and felt this way!! I definately feel the pain and the emotion behind this write!! You did an excellent job expressing your feelings!!! This piece is portrayed very well!! You did an amazing job!! I love it!!!


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Beautiful sentiments. Knowing the longing in those same thoughts myself I can relate. I too have been there beside the person I loved completely knowing he didn't want me the way I wanted, needed, and loved him. It breaks your heart with every beat. I know it well.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    September 29, 2008

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    this is so beautiful sweetheart
    i love this so so mcuh
    your a wonderful guy
    all my love
    vampy xxx