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To Be a Bird

If I were an animal
I wish to be a bird
with soft,shiny wings
now matter how absurd

Life isn't all it's cracked
up to be.
Sure I'll tell you I'm fine
but really I'm wasting space and Time.

I wish to be a bird
to fly up and away
from all this agony and madness
this all together Sadness
in a thing called reality.

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  • LonelyWolf Tasagka
    February 21

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    Such a beautiful poem of spiritual want and dark lust. Its pretty good for a spiritual/dark poem too. Its gives great imagery and strong feel of the emotions. Great write.

    Sincerely,
    XxDragonWolfxX


  • Nyx Moon
    February 20
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    Loved it Loved It Loved It!!!!!!!