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...She's a talented inspirational writer

Unaware of her true destiny
Identity still folded to be unveiled
Though her innocence wanders around
She feels she’s home in the wonderland

Golden curls crown her inquisitive mind
Eyes see beyond the realm of limited world
Capturing the beauty blooming under rainbow skies
She gathers the butterfly dreams filled with vibrant colors
Gently she whispers to golden dragon, her true friend
A secret about herself – she will go beyond where sun can reach

Glowing purity surrounds her
Angel watches over her
Protected in the dreamland of wonders
She grows to be a writer
To give new definitions to the words beaded together
In the diamond necklace of beautiful poetry
That sparkle in the hearts of her readers

A little bud blooming into a beautiful flower
Touched with the mist of excellence
Caressed with winds of inspirations
A writer paints masterpieces on the canvas of imagination
With the colors of triumphing words to shape into amazing poetry.

True destiny comes to life
Identity unfolded to be admired
Wandering innocence of child still lives within
She knew she was home in her wonderland
…She built her castle far beyond where only her imagination can reach
…She’s a talented inspiring writer

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    October 4, 2008

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    really a terrific write you penned this with great imagery enjoyed the read
    thank you for your entry and good luck in the judging


  • dustookie2
    October 3, 2008
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    I like the introduction you set your word and developed the idea of Alice in her wonderland and all the discoveries as you paint the imagery in words...'her words do sparkle' as does the lady.A beautiful descriptive and expressive dedication.Nicely crafted. Good luck in the contest.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 1, 2008

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    wow, you know this is something, i mean i love it, one of the best in eyes you have done so far, i know there is more to come, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Wow this is just amazing! Your imageery is just stunning. You captured the picture beautifully and wove a wonderful piece around it
    Gaylene


  • maralisa silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    a brilliant take in the image and a perfect dedication to a wonderful poetess I loved your imagery its wonderful good luck in the contest


  • StarEyes
    September 29, 2008

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    You captured this picture sooooo well with your words my dear sweet friend! I adore it! Something in this really hit close to home... I think your timing is perfect! Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


    • imperfectperfection
      September 29, 2008
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      Thanks Hun

      Your words sure make my day and show me the way to Mount Ego - thanks so much for your support... I'm glad you find my scribbles good enough to read and I certainly appreciate your comments. thanks again for your time babe - take care Love Minoo

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