{S T O P and S T A R E}
At the beauty that surrounds you
It is quick and fleeting so just be still
{S T O P and L I S T E N}
To the words you so often hear
Keep them and let them cover you
And listen to their meaning
{S T O P and B E S T I L L}
You may miss something spectacular
Your speed paced world is crashing around you
But you're too busy to notice
Too carefree to care
And too heartless to love
Author notes
HOLA PPLS!! I wrote this in 5 minutes in LA!! It just came to me when I had to write a riddle!
A contest entry
- Ages 14 and under: YOUR FAVORITE PREWRITE by Sky Prince Ireland.
800 points, ended December 15, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Meow....
Comments
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I loved the part where you said "You may miss something spectacular" because that is true, f you turn your head for one moment you could miss awhole string of events. A good write
~Ros -
Wow! This certainly came out thoroughly for something written in just five minutes. Good job.
Thanks for entering; good luck.
Brian
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