Dream Catcher ( Gold )

Spun webbing pure as silk

delicate a weave woven

creative art

master its piece.

Pearls of dew rest easy

within the rising of the dawn

breaks the newness of the day

upon the mist of the morning.

Suspended

my chain of life

finds balance

for this my night work is done.

Scurry not

for I am the catcher

holding a dream

in slumber as you sleep.

Author notes

My response to

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4623257

40 lines or less

I want to be your Spider

In a list

{ Gold } • next in list

A contest entry

Wanna be in My ZOO? Check it out! (Contest) by Paloszoo. 525 points, ended October 10, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Paloszoo
October 10, 2008
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Oh, and welcome to my family
Paloszoo
October 10, 2008
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You are now My pet spider.
- Reptile Lady
  October 10, 2008
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  thank you
  I am your Spider and hope you will be a part of my family too
  Julie xxx
carole21
October 7, 2008

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well done . . liked "Pearls of dew rest easy" and "for I am the catcher" .. good luck in the contest
lianonsidhe
October 6, 2008

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Lovely lacey, filligree feel to this poem. Softly it draws you in to the web without letting you sense danger until it's too late! Well wordcrafted!
Midnite wolf
October 3, 2008

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i love this, it goes brilliantly with the pic and the background fits well too, great piece hun, good luck in the contest.
Bosiarbooger
October 1, 2008
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wonderful
great write spiders we either love them or hate them. best of luck to you in the contest, Boog
Cynthia Gaines
September 30, 2008

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Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!
Best of luck in the contest!!! Peace Always
chilali
September 30, 2008

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Wow
Simply beautiful. My favorite were the last two stanzas though! But the entire poem was really amazing. And I love the background. And just in case you are wondering, yes, I am still amazed. Haha. Great work
Paloszoo
September 30, 2008

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chills.....ok, I have to admit that some spiders weave the most beautiful webs. And not all spiders are ugly. Some are stunning, but all give me the heebie jeebies. This, however, is a beautifully written piece! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored.
aboomer
September 30, 2008

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Love this!!! Great wording!
I have several spider pics - my one is like this, only the spider is bright yellow!
Great write!! best wishes in your contest.
BuriedTreasures
September 30, 2008

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Way to go, Julie---Sensual, delicate, beautiful!
Beautiful picture and your take on it is equally beautiful.
This reminds me of our "Aard Vark" conversation!
Best of luck in the contest!
Sweet Impatience
September 30, 2008

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this is absolutely amazing Mum.. Your words paint a picture all of their own. even though I don't like spiders, in fact I can't stand them, you make them sound appealing and nice..

good luck in the contest Mum

kat
Abe 1
September 30, 2008

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kewl !
luv de last lines babes
do ya ave a dream catcher i wonder ?
well done
cheers
abe
daviscth
September 30, 2008

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Oh wow sis, this is such an awesome imagery filled write!!! I love what you have created. It just goes to show that you can even make a spider sound wonderful. This goes great with the other poem sis. Good luck. Love you
maralisa
September 30, 2008
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aw a wonderful poem julie the imagery is brilliant very deep and beautiful good luck in the contest my friend take care marina