Such a sad thing
to look upon a swing
and not see a child playing.
No children
to run and play.
No children
to chase a ball.
No children
laughing and yelling
mommy...
It's a sad thing
to look upon this swing
and not see
a child.
Author notes
picture is prompt #1 http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f304/luvlessromance/asfd.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- B&W Photo Prompt Contest by Girl With Guitar.
700 points, ended October 30, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all the prewrites you want (theres a catch) by serenity silvermoon.
400 points, ended January 7, 299 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Probably a little too simple, you could take the image to a whole nother level than this. Also, you need to include the image, even though I can assume which you used, it's just part of the rules.
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actually I had the picture in the poem itself but it seems that when you go from a paid to free prescription they take all the pictures you use off your poems. Why I dunno. I figured the ones you had already used before the change would be safe. But mine aren't. So picture has been added.
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Just a swing that speaks volumes The pic evokes feelings of sadness to my deepest core nicely penned you captured the pictures essance
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