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what have you done

what have you done to hurt her this bad
when i see her cry like that, it hurts me
i hate to see her in that position again and again
it hurts you too but why did you cause it?

she is the only one i can see when there is something wrong.
she is the one i have to pick up when she falls.
i an the one who dusts her off and kisses her wounds
i am the ONLY one who tells her that it is ok

what was going on in your mind when you did it?
i know you feel bad about it, but that doesnt change her hurt.
she trusted you and you threw her to the sharks
and i dont know if i can save her this time

you better be glad she is holding me back
cause if she wasnt, you would be mine to rip apart
you wondered how much i cared for her
well now you should know

even though i will stand by you
i am not going to pick you up when you fall
im not even going to dust you off
that is your job now

you hurt her so much
but i wont hurt you, no matter how much i want to
that is because it is her wishes
cause she forgives you....

but you ever do anything like this again
just know that there will be hell to pay
because when you mess with my sister
the big bitchy sister comes out to play....

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i am sorry if this is mean, but its the only way to express how i feel about a situation... and when you mess with my younger sister like that... you dont want to deal with me

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  • irdefk
    October 1, 2008

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    nice poem.. oh my jesus there are 666 ppl online right now!! and I'm about to put 3 more of our vid.s on youtube!!!


  • KyleBerg gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Chilling.
    It's lovely that you would stand up for your lil sister like this
    Awesome writing, keep it up


  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    September 29, 2008
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    wow...AMAZING!

    wow..Molly this is amazing..It's not mean it just lets your anger out. It's good to let your anger out like this insted of ripping them to shreds..even if you want to it's still wrong. I really love this poem and it has alot of emotion and it's so true..thanks molly for always being there for me when I couldn't pick myself back up when I fell. I'm glad you're always there for me and you know I'm always here for you!And yes I forgive them because it's not in me to hate plus it's the Christian thing to do. I know you don't want to but I'm glad you forgave them too. I love you Molly and I'm glad you are keeping my wishes. Thanks and God Bless!

    Love eternally,
    In Christ,
    ~Kayla

    • bandgeek
      September 30, 2008
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      well you know how much it pissed me off to see you hurt like that.... and i still am going to not hurt them in anyway... I Loveth You KayKay Darling!

      • XxForeverFaithfulxX
        September 30, 2008
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        I love you too molly but you know that it's the Christian thing to do..Forgive and try to forget..that's what I'm trying to do anyways..and honestly..if we screamed at them that would make them feel better but telling them it's ok like that..it makes the guilt hurt them worse than we ever could..but I still love them and I do forgive them..I Loveth You Too Molly Darling!

        • bandgeek
          September 30, 2008
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          yeah, we are "killing them with kindness" lol but you have to admit, it would make us both feel a whole lot better...

          • XxForeverFaithfulxX
            September 30, 2008
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            you know what..I really wanted to yell and scream so bad but I really couldn't not just because it was wrong because you know that's not me plus it would hurt me in the end..because you know I don't want to yell but at the same time I do....I DON'T KNOW!!!! *IS SO COFUSEDED!!!*

            • bandgeek
              September 30, 2008
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              if i had the ability to scream, i would, not at them tho... just for the fun on it and plus i am in alot of physical and mental pain!

              • XxForeverFaithfulxX
                September 30, 2008
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                I'm so sorry molly! but I bet you would yell at them eventually..one day you're gonna just lose it and let it all out and just yell and scream at them and I'll be right beside you....LAUGHING MY BUT OFF!!!! that will be the day!

                • bandgeek
                  September 30, 2008
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                  KAYLA!!!!! I SAID I WOULD NEVER...... awwww who am i kiding? i would! lol and it will be soooooooooooooooooooooooooo funneh!

                  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
                    September 30, 2008
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                    I know right!...you know we are such dorks! We are talking over comments instead of messages..come on lets message oh nooo we're to good for that lets talk over comments! OK! lol i'm sorry I could help saying it!!


                    • bandgeek
                      September 30, 2008
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                      SOOOOOO? WE ARE PROAD TO BE DORKS. Y'HEAR THAT EVERYONE? I AM PROAD TO BE A DORK!!!! hehehehehehe

                      • XxForeverFaithfulxX
                        September 30, 2008
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                        *CLAPS* BRAVO! BRAVO! lol yes molly I am proud to be a dork! YOU HEAR THAT WORLD OR AP..WHATEVER! I ISH A DORK AND PROUD OF IT!! anyways...I hope tomorrow is better for you than today..and I hope I don't have another day like today or any day like this week...ok! lets just wish for a really happy day tomorrow! oh happy day...oh happy day! sorry...I took a nap ok..I'm alittle hyper...just a little!


                        • bandgeek
                          September 30, 2008
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                          *clap* nice voice to hear over ap!!! lol.... soooooooo, what is up?

                          • XxForeverFaithfulxX
                            September 30, 2008
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                            Oh nothing much just talking to you over comments instead of messaging each other like normal people do..yeah! so what are you doing?

                            • bandgeek
                              September 30, 2008
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                              i thought we went over this, we are not normal people..... we are dorks, that just so happen to be very HOTT! lol! nothin much here... just waiting for my mommy to bring my ice cream hometh!


                              • XxForeverFaithfulxX
                                September 30, 2008
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                                I know it!! we is very HOTT!! lol

                                • bandgeek
                                  October 1, 2008
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                                  LOL . we should totally make a video and put it on youtube and then put it on our yearbook pages... just like me and kristen did, it would be hilarious... wats up Granny???!!!

                                  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
                                    October 1, 2008

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                                    Lol..oh that would be soo stupid! but
                                    funny! really really funny!lol ok we're
                                    going to make a video..but not that one!
                                    lol I couldn't do that!

                                    • bandgeek
                                      October 1, 2008

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                                      it wont be stupid!!! it would be funny
                                      i can image us doing that, and it would be sooooo funny!
                                      oh, by the way, see if mom can call my mom to see if i can come over friday night for the weekend!!! DO IT!!!!!! i need to get out of that house!!!!!

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