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Kiss Me Gently

Hold me close to your body
Touch me softly
Kiss my lips
And tell me you love me,
Hold me forever
Never let go
hug me slowly
Hold your promise
To never let go
And say you love me,
Kiss me gently
Hold me tightly
hug me tenderly,
NEVER LET ME GO....










My Buddi HELPED today...9/29/08
  Thank You, Eric

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Humm..amen..this is really a prayer of the love..for the love..to the love..and wonderful sentiment bringing eternal esences in the words...

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • White Tiger 96
    September 29, 2008

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    I loved it! It showed allot of emotion and was very well written. I look forward to reading more from you. Good Luck in the contest, I'm sure you'll win.Smile