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Mayb i waz not d one...

Why did you deceive me?
Why did you lie?
I only asked for truth,
why did you have to hide?
You should have told me you didn't love me
so I wouldn't have pinned up my hopes in vain.
Your affection had me fooled
I believed in what I saw.
I gave you my heart,
and you ripped apart my very soul.
I have no emotions left with me
You drained out even the last drop of tear
Now there is just this void.
A hollowness within that nothing can ever fill.
I could have given my life for you
never realised it was all a means of play
I kept on suffocating
Maybe all the time,your mind was somewhere else.
Dunno why....but u just didn't care.
It was my foolishness i agree
But i tried to hold on like I never had before
Maybe the fear of losing you
made me cling to you too hard...
Or maybe I just kept ignoring
that I was surely not the one...

Resumed writing poems aftr lyk ages.....do lemme kno hw it iz!!!

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  • suresh0807
    July 1
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    i just sang your poem and it was good for any albu


  • saswat21mohanty
    September 30, 2008

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    very true!!!but i think it is the lover who is weak and sulking....and it is not the destiny that decides the fate of his love