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Painted Memories

too many screams of nightmarish dreams
leaving me in sorrows arms
hearts left bleeding from heartless schemes
and love sick dreams
bound in scars from being left behind
lost in the remembrance of things
tender hands and kisses of wine
foggy memories prevail casing shadows
making life a proverbial hell
left with just painted memories to cloud my mind

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  • ckwriter69
    October 6, 2008

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    very dark and sad. Nice flow to this one, I like the rhyming of dreams and schemes. Good job, thanks for sharing and never stop writing.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 1, 2008

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    it has been a while but you pen still dances with your strong emotions as a sorrowful melody, keep it flowing