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I mIsSeD u...

I missed you
Those eyes of yours that used to stare at me
Your fingers that used to be entertwined with mine
Your smile the moment you used to get a glimpse of me
Your teasing me incessantly till irritation used to win over
The times you looked at me and said it waz meant to be forever
Your tears when you said you wanted me back
That you wanted me to stay till the sky fell over
The very thought that something in me could moisten your eyes
That some one could love me so very much
I missed those times
I missed your touch
Every moment that passed
Every where we had been
Every little thing that u said,
now I don't care even if you didn't mean
Every drop of tear I shed
Every lonely day that I spent
Every time I pretended I was happy,
Every time I showed I didn't really care
All those days I longed for your Love,
I longed for your kiss
Oh! It will never be mine again.
Were we so damn incompatible?
If not,then what was it that really went wrong?
Now that we have parted
I know reminiscing will get me nothing
This love has to end
It’s going nowhere now.
Since you no longer love me,
I would be a fool to wait.

Resumed writing poems aftr lyk ages.....do lemme kno hw it iz!!!

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  • sOuL
    October 3, 2008

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    this is a very nice poem on the topic
    i really liked it
    i wish your love will come to you
    wish you happy life


    • sushree
      October 3, 2008
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      Thnx 4 commentin on ma poem...
      and...i dun want him back...m happy wid d tym spent wid him....v jes ver not meant 2 b u kno!!!


  • saswat21mohanty
    September 30, 2008
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    its so funny how feelings change ways!!!