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A Single Breath

Take me in
To the beautiful things you know
Bring me close
So i can see your eyes aglow

Wash away all my tears
That have dragged out through the years
Hold me close so my heart can beat with yours
And gaze into my eyes so you know my love is sure

I fall to my knees
And wish upon a star
While i gaze into the eyes of my sweet love.
Your beauty takes away even the breath of a dove.

A single breath
That holds a single tear.
For i have found the one
To whom i could hold the world dear.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 26
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    Beautiful

    You have written such a lovely love poem here Bravo honey


  • Hetha gold member
    February 24

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    This is so sweet it melts my heart. They are so lucky to have you. Great job and keep on penning.

  • PureCountry
    February 21

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    Brave Bear

    you have penned a worth composition of love for the one you adore. I applaud your efforts, for truely your words are those thoughtfully given and wonderfully rendered.

    Niaish for sharing

    Silent Hawk


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 6

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    melts the heart and pulls a sigh for you na son are a true romantic...your tender words of love i am sure has caressed her heart and she now sees the wonderful man you are thank you love for share this with me


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 5

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    Beautiful poetry here

    This is truly a most beautiful write you have here and thankyou ever so much for placing it on the group sight .


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    September 29, 2008

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    Word perfect from start to finish. A fantastic view from the inside. One that will melt the heart of the receiver. Well done.

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