Romeo had it easy
Trying to find out
At the window
why?
Could you feel the rain on my skin
When you watched me disappear
From the window of your room
A puddle for each possiblity
Distorted by the rippled drops
And now I`m left
Soaking in the mud
The bitter cold walk
Wet clothes constricting
Salt rain tracing
Rain or tears, one is all
This Waltsing strid in the flowing stream
That traced the road
Dividing, to converge again
The same start, a diffrent path
The same Fail
They fall only to lose more
I gambled and lost the sun
Keeping this walk of life in the rain
Author notes
Not so great I had an idea but I dont think i managed to pull it off
A contest entry
- A Contest by luna-midnight.
700 points, ended October 19, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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i think this is actually really good
you really pulled at emotions, and the ideals of life. thanks for entering and good luck
Stephanie ♥
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