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I wonder

I wonder if she knows I watch her sleep at night
for no dreams I conjure could be quite as fine
as when I see her lying there beside me
  my soul knows peace and all the world seems fine

I wonder does she know I've never questioned
  for the path I walk is always right with me
when she walks beside me through each hour
there is no other journey I could see

She's all and everything I have imagined
every dream or grand desire I've ever had
and I could want no other for eternity
for no one else could make me feel as glad

I wonder if she's happy every moment
in the blissful way she keeps me through each day
I hope I give her half the love she bestows on me
for if I do, I think she might just stay

And, I wonder and I pray I make her happy
I'll do anything, that I might make it so
she has touched me in a way that leaves no wanting
long as I can be assured she will never go.

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    awww
    this is love unselfish and giving
    this is a big heart
    the second stanza touched my heart
    oh so so lovely
    Gorgeous write



  • petalblue2
    October 9, 2008

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    The warmth you shed on her face looking upon her fills me with awe. Every woman would love to have that peaceful lingering of thought, and that pondering of her worth. Truly wonderful words, and lovely sentiment!


  • penman gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Such a great creatin for the contest. So very well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    beautifully written and so full of love

    Riftkin