Slither
Liberating my call
Incubus to those who fall
The one who pretends to be light
However, is a misguided blight
Endevouring God's wrath
Relinquishing my path
Reviving evils control
Eternally bound to the soul
Hidden by unholy white
Transfering poison with my bite
Illegitimate son I drawl
Living the life of the rag doll
Slither
Author notes
ya i'm kinda just reserving a spot till i get home and can listen to the song but it might be good ne ways. (oh and this is in a style poem that I came up with. It spells the title forwards and backwards SLITHER and REHTILS as well the corresponding line rhyme except in this poem where it ended up the lines were equal thus ER and RE don't rhyme but they do rhyme with each other so ya so the style depending on the lines is A BB CC DD EE CC BB A so ya (in my poem yellow it's A BB CC DD CC BB A so ya depends on the letters in the title)oh and the letters spell YELLOW and WOLLEY just an extra thing. I'm taking the word drawl to mean hiss so ya
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Comments
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Very creative and you did well with the rhyme here, it flows nicely. It does seem slightly off at the "rag doll" in flow, but I easily see your meaning and found the poem to be quite intriguing and well done. Unique
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I really like this poem. Ecpecially the ending.
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lol. i did a similar acrostic a few years ago, but have grown far too lazy for such things since.
dig it
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