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Joys

Life is full of joy
that is felt from the heart
because with love
words are not important
silence speaks loud

through the rhythm

of a beating heart

that comes from

life's simple things.

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  • Going Forever
    October 10, 2008
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    WOW. GOOD JOB


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    this particular prompt is one of my most favorites. your poem is beautiful and it touches a place in my heart. sometimes the simplest things in life are what is often needed. I think your poem speaks that in volumes. and you're right, we don't always need words to convey what we feel. this is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem.

    good luck in the contest.

    kat


  • maralisa silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    aw wow I loved your poem good luck in the contest


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    It definitely is the simple things in life that give the most joy!

    Lovely wee write!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    I think this is lovely sweety you did a very nice job thanks for sharing and goodluck in the contest be well.


  • Slick99
    October 1, 2008

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    i like your poem

    how pretty Genna. i wish you luck in the contest!! your friend, -slick


  • Jesann gold member
    September 30, 2008
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    How beautiful!!
    You have a great poem here, I love it. I also agree with the comments below.


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Oh my god Genna! this is an amazing little write, you've really outdone yourself! bless your little cotton socks, your words so young yet so full of wisdom.
    Well done gorgeous.
    I love you xxxxx


  • Stickboy gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    you did great on this one every thing you say is true... I miss you and love you bunches


  • Hope Angel silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    You did a great job with this sweetie. Your words are very true, without love words mean nothing. I love you and good luck

  • cindy4
    September 29, 2008
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    Nice beautiful picture.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    Oh this is beautiful sweetheart.
    Nice picture.
    Love Daddy

  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll272/Temptress41/Love/Love-Card-65.jpg

    here is the link for your prompt.. if this doesn't work for you please let me know.. I'll find you something else


    kat

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