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The truth of life

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Deep in the wooded grove,
a monument does stand
Paying homage to what came before,
on a level mighty grand

The pathway leads to enlightenment,
the stairs are coarse and steep
Along the way, the puzzles of life,
that you’ll find quite deep

If you have the answers to,
those queries that you’re asked
The riddles that have been plaguing you,
may just be unmasked

The answer to the greater good,
or the betterment of man
Can be all yours to keep forever,
to hold right in your hand

You twist and turn you feel your way,
the resolutions lie right ahead
But know this now with one wrong turn,
you may wind up quite dead

The answers are not for everyone,
they can fill you with such greed
With the knowledge comes responsibility,
guidelines you must heed

You stop upon that very last step,
is all this knowledge meant for you
As you turn and walk away,
a thought comes breezing through

You have been enlightened,
for you’ve passed that special test
You’ve proven worth by turning around,
With the truth you’ve been blessed

Author notes

picture inspiration provided by astomious our illustrious host (Bosiarbooger)

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  • smonte19124 gold member
    October 13, 2008
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    AWESOME! Congratulations on the HM. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • chilali
    September 30, 2008

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    A really great take on the picture Boog. Amazing flow throughout the entire poem! Looking forward to reading so much more from you Good luck in the contest, not that you'll need it. Well done!


  • movedon
    September 30, 2008

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    I entered this contest, but I know for sure that I wont be winning!!!! Not gold at least, as I'm sure that you will!

    ing alone,
    Mylee


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Brilliant ! !

    Another excellent write from you Boog Your poetry is such a pleasure to read. Keep 'em comin' Good luck in the contest. I can see you are gonna need lots more room on your trophy shelf