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Distant Dreaming

Step back, forget all around you
Open your eyes, let silence surround you
A clean new page waiting for ink
Each of us hunting for the missing link

Just blank eyes in a photograph
Empty faces staring right back
Layers of mystery, shadows of doubt
Unclear meanings we can't live without

Without the seperation
You can never meet again
You cannont have
New beginnings
Without an end

Wind whispering to the stars
Just the stars
It's the wind whispering to the stars
Just the stars
It's the wind whispering

Without the seperation
You can never meet again
You cannont have
New beginnings
Without an end

Without the seperation
You can never meet again
You cannont have
New beginnings
Without an end

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  • SimplyNoodle
    November 23, 2008
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    congrats on the honrable menchtion, like the poem to ^.^


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    love this and it should be place to music.
    something you know you did yourself

    Riftkin