I'm underneath all the pain,
Drowning in the suffering of the mind,
Not swimming but sinking,
My fate's hopelessly defined.
I'm trying to survive through my emotions,
But they rage on,
Anger and fear and lust,
Soon I will be gone.
Trying to grab onto the speeding car,
That threatens to run me down,
Gasping for air as I fall deeper still,
I know that I'm going to drown.
I'm underneath all the pain,
Diving deep into the suffering of the mind,
Hoping that I'll find a light,
As I become confined.
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Making me cry
I've read all of you poems now, and im starting to cry. And i cant point my sadness at anything directly. I cant explain.... All i know is that i love, miss, and care for you. -
i miss you! i hope you are feeling better!
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Go Daelynn! Woo hoo! 'Cept, dude. Your poems make me sad
Write 1 4 me, k?
For: Daelynn By: Stephanie
Unicorns under the sun
Unicorns dance and toss their mane,
They are what keeps this crazy world sane,
Unicorns fly, and nuzzle your chin,
You cant be sad when your with a unicorn,
Its a win-win!
=D
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Great piece ! I think it's one of your best works.Keep it up!
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great job.....
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