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Tamed

He sat dangling

from the nose hairs of moment

Thoughts vivid
embraced in calm

his heart an empty cave

A dawn of bliss-
Darkness reveals a hole

shining light through

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  • maa gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    a very beautiful and unique response to the prompt ... I was smiling about the nose-hairs of moment ... and enjoyed the vivid thoughts embraced in calm ... a wonderful verse, colorfully delightful ...

    thank you,
    maa