Curse you, Goddess of Love
Why must you be so good
At everything you do?
You strike your arrow
Through their hearts
Sending them into
This whirlwind of passion
They sweetly hold hands
Kiss each other softly
Wrap their arms around each other
One soul becomes entangled in the other
Their hearts intertwined for all eternity
Your work is so beautiful
Displayed everywhere
Curse you, Goddess of Love
Your artwork is a sick reminder
Of my solitariness
A twisted memento
Of how my empty hand aches
Yearning for human contact
A hurtful little keepsake
Patched away in my memory
Of how unaccompanied I am
How alone I really feel
Author notes
I hope this is what you're looking for.
Enjoy!
A contest entry
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320 points, ended October 14, 2008, 38 entries
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Comments
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wow...
Well im notreally sure if i get this write... but does his have to do about how your alone... I dont really get this type of poems... They are really dark and thats just not what i understand... Thanks for the write... Good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah -
I think that this is very good, and shows a lot of emotion.
Yeah, I feel like that as well, but have faith in the fact that things shall happen, when the time is right.
It would be hard
and would be a straight lie.
If all of humanity
tried to deny.
There longing to be
with someone in love.
To feel a great feeling
from heaven above.
Yeah, sorry I was feeling poetic. Anyway, good poem and good luck in the contest.
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