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Ayin

When I turn to look for Thee
with I of me that does not see,
You softly stir, Ayin within:
the Fountain whence all souls begin.
For You are never far from me,
but inside me and I in Thee;
You are the holy "I" in we,
oh Lord, the Eye through which I see.

Author notes

Ayin - Hebrew word meaning Origin, Eye, Fountain, Source.

"When we look with the 'I'
We dream.
When we look for the 'I'
We awaken."
- Mooji -

http://www.mooji.org/home.html


please let this quote resonate within you ...
and respond through an inspired verse of eight lines ...
rhyming or free verse both welcome ...

thank you
maa

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  • queens1
    October 10, 2008
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    Enlightening verse. Congratulations on the Gold!
    Patty


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    Ah..you are in complete staze of the surrender and at this juncture the amalgmation of the self with HIM brings the peaceful mind to create the wonderful poetry..well done...


  • PerVirtuous
    October 3, 2008
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    Well deserving of the gold! Fantastic.


  • Venugopal gold member
    October 1, 2008
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    Nothing but Excellent, congrats on winning gold


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    Pure gold...

    The power of your deep understanding is so poetically portrayed here... a well earned gold for a beautiful espression of Truth.

    namaste,

    Rahad


  • maa gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    absolutely stunning ...
    the path of the mystic is truly delightful ...
    for the mystic, although speaking in words that bridge the realms of duality and unity, does not belong to duality ... yet (s)he delights in keeping an apparent "relationship" of "me" and "my beloved", for the blissful-painful joy of losing Him and finding Him again and again ... while all the way dwelling in conscious Unity with Him, in Him, as Him ...

    shalom ...
    maa


    • myrataal silver member
      October 1, 2008

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      Your comments read like nurturing ...

      fountains of wisdom. Thank you, Marion, for fusion in realms of Beautiful truths.

      This Gold is for you and your divine contests ...


      Love
      Myra


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    When I am in need of grounding, I only need visit your words and I feel better

    Juls


  • stompsalot
    September 29, 2008

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    Beautifully penned my friend. I know and can always depend on you to steer me back in a positive direction and that you have done with your gentle guidance leading me back to HIM.
    Many blessings
    m.


  • MargaretG
    September 29, 2008

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    Beautiful and tender

    When we do not see, we turn - your poem turns me around.
    "to turn, turn will be our delight,
    until by turning, we turn 'round right."
    This is inspired verse, and such a pleasure to read.

  • Bad Bill
    September 29, 2008
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    This is both intelligent and beautiful--I like it very much.

    Best of luck,
    Bill

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