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Forever I Swing

Will you die for me
will you be mine to watch over
under gravestone
where your mystery is forever
are you ghostly
in hell
in heaven
or just non-existence
I swing over your grave
to feel the happy times
without your horror
will you die for me
will you be mine to watch over
under gravestone
I love you now
I feel your cool breezes
I am why you are dead
only mystery we share forever

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  • penman gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very well done. A great creation for the theme. Best of luck in the contest.


  • thesefadingstars.
    September 30, 2008

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    I quite liked this poem. While I was reading it I worked out what picture it was and was quite pleased. anyway, I did like this alot. good luck and thank you for entering