You want me to say I Love You
Well that is so easy to do
You fill my life with wonderment
And I truly do love you
You are the spring within my step
The rainbow in the sky
You're the moon that shines so bright
The twinkle in my eye
It's you that I adore
You are the whole world to me
Your kisses send me soaring
Leaving me breathless as can be
You are the heartbeat within me
Without you I'd come undone
So darling please know I love you
It's you, you're my only one
A contest entry
- Fulfill My Dreams And Say You Love Me. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 2, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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Cleverly written, and sweet to boot!
peace
doug
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Thank you doug, I appreciate your comment. Katie
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sweet words for the darling of your life. well done.
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Thank you Confusedboy. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Katie
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, words anyone would be pleased in hearing indeed, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you Josie for the gold trophy. I am truly honored for this award. I enjoyed entering your contest. Katie
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That had a lovely flow and message to it.
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Thank you Black Narcissus. Katie
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I adore this. Wonderful work.
-JM<3
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Thank you JM<3 for your comment. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Katie
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