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Grave digger

I dig day by day
For another soul
To be buried in clay.

Yet Sometimes I wonder
Who will dig my grave
When my soul surrender.

Sometimes I cry
Why? Why?
Does another soul have to die?

Why is the ground not fed up?
With souls of little children
And Bodies of grownups.

I’ve come to realize that
All My worries
All My cries
It’s all vanity.


Death is the price we pay
Since sin is a curse we posses
It’s a shame, after all other places
We end up in clay

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  • Shuberth
    October 15, 2008

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    Nice!

    Uhhhm

    LOVE IT!

    Nicely Written!


    I enjoyed reading!

    Shuberth


  • aanika
    September 30, 2008

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    Death is the price we pay
    Since sin is a curse we posses
    posses --> possess

  • Abner
    September 29, 2008
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    I haven't write in few weeks so i thought id write something death since i just lost a friend..so i hope you will find it delightful.