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"Petrified"

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The children were so fearful

with tears streaming down their cheeks.

Panting, out of breath;

So afraid, that no one speaks.

 

They ran away in panic

from the vision that appeared

and their comprehensive terror

was reflected in their tears.

 

They had ventured to the graveyard

where the wisest never go.

The old oaken growth enveloped

the hell-forsaken souls below.

 

The cold wind blew its branches;

sounding with a haunting call

as it's brittle leaves cascaded;

death-spiraling in their fall.

 

The children saw the images

imposed within the tree.

Rigidified expressions

gazing at them, vacantly.

 

The wind-blown oaken branches

gave the faces vibrancy.

Staring eyes were watching

with mouths gaping absently.

 

Silent screams were uttered

and their nightmare had begun.

Horrification at it's apex

as the children turn to run.

 

The branches seem clairvoyant,

in their splintered, cold embrace

with a morbid, precognition

to hold them there, in place.

 

The bramble clawed their ankles

as it sprung its hidden snare.

The oaken beast's lower appendages,

gripping talons in their hair.

 

Gothic in appearance;

Awestricken terror is applied.

Demon-Spawned Foreboding.

Children cower, petrified!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

A contest entry for:
My first contest! Picture Prompt
I've finally mustered up enough points to hold a contest! =) Huzzah!
by astomious

**This excellent picture was drawn using the technique 'Pointillism' which conveys the art by the administration of dots.
It was created by the contest host "Astomious"
(Brandan) who is obviously a great artist, as well as a poet.
Well Done!

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  • Back at ya
    October 3, 2008
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    WOW -- WOW--WOW !!

    That's all I can say about this poem is WOW.
    Excellent take on the well drawn picture by astomious.
    You gave it life with your creative and imaginative story>
    Excellent flow of verse
    Awesome Rhyme and nothing seemed forced at all!

    Love the wording and imagery in this composition.
    This is worthy of the GOLD AWARD in my opinion>
    Best of luck to you!


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    Great write

    Another great write. Thank you for sharing it.
    Vito


  • penman gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    Excellent

    A terrific creation for the theme. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • daviscth silver member
    September 29, 2008

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    I know I shouldn't be.... but I'm stunned at the awesome talent you have!!! This is a wonderful, well done take on the picture. Good luck...


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    Great take on the pic. Lovely flow.

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